书评 - 晋江文学城

为什么要用这么多英文啊？用这么多英文真的没问题吗？！
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“oh！should I put the ‘human’to cross”
修正后读起来比较顺：“Oh! I should cross off the \'human\'.”
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“this is my base, with human Words home”
修正后读起来比较顺：“This is my base, with human word it is called as home.”
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“If you choose to follow my life,then you should know something.”（既然你选择跟着我生活，那就应该让你知道一些事情。）
修正后读起来比较顺：“If you choose to live with me, then there is something you should know.”
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“I called the broken blade,is the mechanical life forms from Cybertron,you can also call me for the car.”（我叫断刃，是来自赛博坦星的机械生命体。你也可以称我为汽车人）修正后读起来比较顺：“My name is Broken Blade, a mechanical life forms from Cybertron. You can also refer me as the Autobots.”
（汽车人不是Car！Car是车子，汽车人的英文是Autobots才对。）
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“And I live a very dangerous,very hard,carbon based fine soft body may not be able to adapt to.”（和我生活非常危险，还很辛苦，软绵绵的幼生体可能会无法适应）
修正后读起来比较顺：“Living with me is very dangerous and very hard. It is very difficult for a create like you to adapt.”
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“However,more difficult to adapt to me down,you want to become a soldier,no matter how hard the environment can not be used to complain that your human catharsis.”（不过，就算难以适应也要给我挺下来，你要成为一个战士，无论多么艰苦的环境都不可以进行你们人类的宣泄（指大哭大闹）来抱怨。）
修正后读起来比较顺：“However, even if it\'s difficult, you must adapt it. So no matter how hard is it, you will not be complaining like how you human do. Because you are going to become a solider”
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“I don’t have any mention gas and pity feelings for you,it will only let me CPU cache too much,can not be fast.（我是不会对你有任何同情和怜惜的情感，那只会让我的CPU缓存过多，无法快速进行运算）
修正后读起来比较顺：“I wouldn\'t be feeling any compassion to you, because that will only fill in useless stuff and slow down my CPU.”
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“If you give me trouble,I will take you to the man,that adoption immediately,whether you like it or not.”（如果你要是给我添麻烦，我会立刻把你送到人类那领养，不管你是否愿意）
修正后读起来比较顺：“If you give me any trouble, I will take you to the adoption center immediately, whether you like it or not.”
如果用的是，“”，大致上应该是：“”
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“You can call me sir,against the Deceptions and I.”（你可以叫我长官，和我一起对抗霸天虎）
修正后读起来比较顺：“ You can call me sir. And we will be fighting together against the Decepticon.”
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修改后感觉好棒啊怎么办？
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真评价：
期待接下来的剧情。
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