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  •   昏。。。
      "I don't."
      Anxiety moved促使 her to question him.
      His answer was puzzling: "I shall probably want to live."活下去
      "But why, Mr. Emerson? What do you mean?"
      "I shall want to live, I say."
      这应该是指the beloved risen from the death这句长旅里的话的意思吧。

      有困惑:
      1。在意大利,M是否真的又昏倒过?
      2.用语感觉不大像M。我感觉喷水池昏倒可能是假的,是暗喻。但河边谈话中的某几句倒像是真的。
      3.对话太过女性化,M的用词应该更简练,更出彩。

      Cpt5

      Lucy/F, Bartlett/M, Charlotte /角色本身
      F你把同一个人都拆分了,算你狠。。。
      Would Miss Bartlett and Miss Honeychurch join the party? Charlotte declined for herself; she had been there in the rain the previous afternoon.这是小说里的情节。 But she这里开始是M了 thought it an admirable idea for Lucy, who hated shopping, changing money, fetching letters, and other irksome duties讨厌的杂务—all of which Miss Bartlett must accomplish this morning and could easily accomplish alone.

      我真想知道这个厌恶杂务的Lucy是谁,我很怀疑是F,早就怀疑,所有与钱有关的事情,都是M在打理,到底是宠F到什么样的地步啊?
      汗,我们家在这点上也这样。真正灵魂自由勇敢的那个从来管不好钱。

      "No, Charlotte!" cried the girl, with real warmth. "It's very kind of Mr.Beebe, but I am certainly coming with you. I had much rather." 这里的cry确实是喊叫。
      额。。。你宁可陪着处理讨厌杂务的Charlotte,也不愿意开开心心地摆脱杂务陪Beebe去party?
      "Very well, dear," said Miss Bartlett, with a faint flush of pleasure that called forth a deep flush of shame on the cheeks of Lucy.
      开始脸红,你们两个又开始害羞了么?
      这么点小心思在Bartlett/M眼里应该很明显吧?Lucy/F你也终于开始害羞了么?

      How abominably糟糕地 she behaved to Charlotte, now as always! But now she should alter. All morning she would be really nice to her.
      你是在嘲讽你自己虐自己的角色么?
      She slipped her arm into her cousin's手挽着手, and they started off along the Lung' Arno.

      Lucy fidgeted局促不安; it was tiresome讨厌 of Charlotte to have stopped exactly

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本人同人女一枚,是看得到风景的房间的忠实读者。谨以此阅读笔记,纪念福斯特,即E.M.Foster 以及Hugh Owen Meredith.
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