《【翻译】风弄原著《金玉王朝》》小医Potassium

13、chapter one10

　　Xuan Huaifeng, feeling uneasy under their unwavering gaze, glanced at himself awkwardly and asked, "Is what I'm wearing inappropriate?"

　　After quite some time, Nanny Zhang let out a long sigh of relief. Pressing her palms together, she murmured a Buddhist prayer, exclaiming,"Why, you’re a gold—and—jade lad come to life! Among the countless throngs in the street, there’s not a soul more perfect for this than you. Oh my, look at that upright posture—those shoulders are simply splendid. This outfit, on you, is truly flawless..." She stepped forward to smooth Huaifeng’s collar and sleeves, clucking her tongue in unceasing praise, her eyes shining with endless pride.
　　（译者注：金玉童子比较难翻译，这里先字面翻译。）

　　Xuan Daiyun spoke with a sudden shift in tone ,"Huaifeng, you seem to have lost weight again. This outfit was custom-made by the tailor at Wenyue Zhai, based on the measurements taken last time. Why does the waist look so empty and loose now?"
　　（译者注：原文“忽然”，虽然是转折，但并不是完全相反的意味，所以更多的是换了个口风的意思。
　　文月斋：保留中文翻译。参考《聊斋》就直取汉语拼音翻译Liao Zhai。
　　另，如遇到一些特殊人名地名等，可能涉及威妥玛式翻译，1958年大陆取消威妥玛式翻译，2008台湾取消，因此，这时间以前还保留威妥玛式翻译。）