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....what are you thinking about? we waiting for one month~~it is just like the heading of story!just start yet! like he just went out from the place, then he will start this story which is to go out jiang hu to meet more people to get some thing happend. that's what story like, but here, you stoped it in here!!>...<you can just write like they get seprate, which is he will be alone to go jiang hu to find them, you also can pur robbers in there too, may be he will live with the robbers together safety for a while, then the story can be very good, but realy, i son't want to saying some thing bad, just want you to renew this story cause we and you need to.so please renew the story, you don't wnat we just leave this story here right?and...how old are you?if you're student, you can write the story for practice your story writing; if you're adulte, then you can write it for fun. it makes fun to people read the story too, many people on the web read story are very young, so if you made good story, for youth it is like that sentence people always say: it is good for the country flower....any ways, it make lots of good things(don't thinking about the bad things please), but if it is because you're sick, then that is ok, just care about your body don't let it be hurt(save your body to write the story....),if you don't care about your body. then your friends, family and other people(us..)will care about you alot(tired), then your self is not feeling will too, so please care about your self's body, then that is ok too, i (we) don't right to tell you what to do, but then you get very sick, bad sick, please on the line tell us that first, then we will delete the story from our favorites, so we don't need to sad about the story's stop and your sick. but, in the time, care about your body you still need some times come to renew the story too . right?
so please please renew it.
if you're come back please see here:
are you sick?
are you fine?
are you realy fine?
100% fine?
absolutely fine?
1000% fine?
when will you renew it again?
who in your family use the computer the most?
why don't you try some way to come back erly?
will you stop the story?
will you do some thing bad to me......?
i'm saying the good things to you, so don't mad, and please tell us some thing.

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