well, thank you so much for those suggestions:) good to see your comments without "……" haha I'm not going to torture him that much. I do think love is unfair. He has to pay back and give up lots of things if he want qianzhi. I would arrange come conflicts afterwards^^wish you'll like it
网友:wuyan 打分:2 [2010-03-18 22:43:09]
我这人不会说假话,真话又太直白不会转弯,所以一般我都不说,但大大是丸子的朋友所以我也不想只打。。。点点。所以就实话实说了。
大大你剧情你后面写的不如前面,以后是不是清水我不知道,但现在就整一古代清水小言,没有激情看的也就是个波折或温馨。原以为这文走的是虐情路线,可现在越看越不是那味,这文前面虐的还不错,还是够味的,但后面有点皮条了,就跟炖东西差把火似的,没到那个味。说温不温,说虐不虐的,说激情更米的掉在那。。。。大大你要走虐情路线那就就的坚决点,想办法把人虐到揪心抓肺的,别再这样小抓子挠挠痒似的。。。。。。。。。。期待精采的。。。。。。。。
[1楼] 作者回复 [2010-03-18 23:34:26]
well, thank you so much for those suggestions:) good to see your comments without "……" haha
I'm not going to torture him that much. I do think love is unfair. He has to pay back and give up lots of things if he want qianzhi. I would arrange come conflicts afterwards^^wish you'll like it
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[2楼] 作者回复 [2010-03-19 14:45:50]
俺不想为了虐孟二而虐……这文打完这场仗基本就完结了……孟二不用我虐,他也在自虐……抹汗
说要虐生虐死的……(挠墙,我写不出来啊啊啊啊啊……)
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[3楼] 网友:浅水疏影 [2010-03-19 15:02:47]
居然看到这么长一段英文回复,千千姐。。。。。。。。。
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[4楼] 网友:老千 [2010-03-19 15:14:37]
我暴走……是我弄错了啊,嗷
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[5楼] 网友:魔芋丸子 [2010-03-21 16:47:36]
我是来虎摸大家的!
不要炸毛,顺毛顺毛
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