Well, I think you certainly have talent as a writer. But, you don't really organize your ideas. This novel is so long by now and still nobody knows what you are trying to tell at the end. Well, I feel like there will be no end for this paper. This way you will lose some of your readers. Just suggestion for the writer, you maybe could try to 提炼一下？
网友：wind 打分：0 [2005-06-19 11:20:25]
Well, I think you certainly have talent as a writer. But, you don't really organize your ideas. This novel is so long by now and still nobody knows what you are trying to tell at the end. Well, I feel like there will be no end for this paper. This way you will lose some of your readers. Just suggestion for the writer, you maybe could try to 提炼一下？