《墨大的庆生评by小文子（第一弹）》4185401

1、第1章 额，这篇是

　　额，这篇是超额，本来以为是大家分两次发，所以第一第二弹，结果是自己的。我就只能在第二弹之后再发第一弹了，呵呵。
For the past two months, you’ve been a company to me. Besides freshing my email to see if there’s any offers popping in, to read your new chapter is the other thing I do everyday. Your passage is a little bit idealistic, but it’s right the idealism that touched me the most. You described the relationships among those guys that is precious nowadays in our society.
Canyang grew up in a lot of conflicts. He is proud, he is persistent, he is softhearted and he moist everybody around him as he is like the pure water. Moyan grew up in a cruel real world. He is modest, he is outstanding, he is responsible and the title he has cannot hide his values just like the stone outside the jade cannot hide the jade. Hanhai was brought up in the hatred among last generation. He is filial obedient and he is out-going. He expects the love from his fathers and he fought for that. He showed deep friendship with his brothers in the passage. Yifei is always under a lot of pressure in life. He is tensile, he is thoughtful, he is decisive and he is grateful to everyone in his life. Guxing survived a great change in his life. He has a pride that never changes, he is loyal, he cherishes people more than ever after he was sent to Nifeng. Every one of them was so real that I feel like they are the people around me, not someone far away in a mob doing dealings that I cannot understand. These kids of Moxue all experienced a lot of tribulations and grew up in tears and blood. They fostered characteristics that I admire and revere. Of course, you also won my tears.
Once I talked about the fathers, the Godfather, Zhou, Gao and Zhan. Each one is not good enough to be defined father. But I’ve always believed that one day they gotta be the fathers, the real and excellent ones. As I waited, Moxue started to change the fathers. When Canyang was beaten half life because he wanted to help his father avoid troubles, the Godfather finally realized that Canyang is right the boy that he cared so much. Though there were wounds and blood everywhere, the deepest one in their heart was cured. The godfather felt like a daddy again. Zhan knew from the very beginning that Hanhai is the son of his foe. He didn’t show anything a father should have shown his son. Hanhai expected a lot and he did all he could to win the love from his father. When the time really came that Hanhai’s life might be taken any minute, Zhan understood that no matter who is the biologically father of Hanhai, Hanhai always regarded Zhan as his father. If Hanhai dies, Zhan would be losing everything he cherishes in his life. He started to act like a dad and showed warmth to his son. Gao always hid his love. Like Zhan, Gao knows that Moyan is not his son. So no matter how outstanding Moyan is, Gao never even smiled to Moyan. I wanted to like yell at him “wake up, dude, this is your son, a son who is willing to die for you.” The great thing is, later on, Gao finally said all those things that he should have said the first time they met again. Moyan sees that his father cares about him and can bring him something other than pain. Zhou was like a father to Yifei but never WAS a father. Zhou is the biological father of Hanhai yet he still pulled the trigger. I was thinking “what’s wrong with this guy? When one day he leaves the mob, all he has are the two sons who truly care about him.” So I was glad to see that he started to show his concern to Yifei by holding Yifei up and asked about his wound. Maybe he can be a better father once he realizes the value of his sons. Moxue never throw a cold and lifeless mob leader to us, but she showed us even people like them need family, need love and need someone to warm their hearts that were frozen by the fights in the underworld.
All the female characters didn’t showed themselves much. They left the stage to a bunch of guys early enough. Maybe if they were here, we could avoid some really sad and sanguinary scenes. But the process that these guys developing love and kindness is even more touching.
Moxue, I have to say that you are brilliant! Maybe your writing is not THE best, but you wrote everyday for us and talked about our feed-backs everyday. You are the first author that feels like a close friend to me. The discussions we had really impressed me. Today is your birthday so I wish you Happy Birthday! Herzlichen Glückwunsch zum Geburtstag! In the coming days, I know for sure you will walk on. Maybe I will be too busy to support you everyday like I am doing now. But believe me, I am always there for you. Hope your life is better and better and hope your work draws more and more attention.
May God be with you.