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  •   送给阿剑的长评~~
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    1.这是一篇很新颖的文
    首先,这是一片很新颖的文,唔,好像阿剑的文都挺新颖的说。
    当我看见书名时,一下子就萌上了,唔,总受啊!!!!!!!(捂脸)
    通过笔记本召唤什么的,好萌的,不过讨人厌好像不看动漫啊,不过这更加大了被笔记本君拐骗的可能啊!
    2.关于讨人厌少年
    他虽然对于别人的评论不知所措,但在别人谈论自家父母时,毫不犹豫的站了出来。
    他帮废纲时,并没有想太多,只是单纯的帮助别人。
    总的来说,讨人厌少年虽然很废材,但很孝顺,虽然很苦逼,但很善良,。。。总的来说,讨人厌少年是个好人!!!!!!!!
    嗯,天天愉悦我们。
    3.关于笔记本君
    话说笔记本君也是萌点啊!!!!!
    虽然笔记本君好像每次都以欺负讨人厌少年为乐趣,但不可否认,他在文中起到了巨大的作用。没有他就少了很多萌点啊!!!
    总觉得笔记本君才是大BOSS。。。幕后黑手。。。。
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    不知写啥了(捂脸),就这样吧,我是来骗分的。。。。。。好吧,阿剑,希望你不要太欺负讨人厌了,人家是个好孩子的说。
    最后说一句,阿剑,我最爱的无脸君咧?!?你把它藏哪去了?!?吐出来啊!吐出来(掐你摇)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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