《评《大明奇情录》》5975843

1、第1章 Reall

　　Really good. but,something I must say - it is kind of annoying that Lung is always telling other people \"oh, please you can hurt me the same way and I would have no complaint!\" Or \"Just take my life if only you would help this other person.\" Yes, I understand she is supposed to be generous and willing to stand up for other people, but, really? There are lots of ways to help people and show that you care. What good does it do if you just die? I guess she has been really lucky so far that the people she met has not taken her up on her offer and just kill her (yes, that would the end of the story I know).
I think the story and writing are very good. Just a suggestion that you can show a character as caring in other ways. For example, you can apologize for something you did not mean to do, but it is too much to _always_ say please hurt me back. Anyway, keep up the good work!
Recently, I am re-watching the Legend of the Condor Heroes and this story certain fit very well with that and the style is very reminiscent of the legendary Jin Yong.