《评《作者对展昭行为界定的废话》》5836551

1、第1章 First

　　First, I am sorry typing in English - I am trying practicing typing in Chinese. However, after reading your own comments, I would like to say something. I want to say this is one of the best 貓鼠同人 I\'ve ever read. Some people might not like the 展昭 you wrote, for me, I just feel heartbroken because he suffered so much, and 白玉堂 suffered due to the consequence of 展昭\'s sufferings. I see 2 distinct chacraters and yet not confict. People might think that 展昭 is not the 展昭 they like or know, for me, I think it makes sense given the story you wrote. And the story goes along smoothly with the characters. I am looking forward and very anxious about the continuation of the story. As for myself, I really hope this will be a good ending. I read the original novel before, 白玉堂 is my favorite character, and when I saw him died, I put down the book and never read it again, I was too upset. I jut think it\'s already a bad ending for 白玉堂 then there is no point to write another bad ending since it\'s 同人 - just to satisfy my heart desire. By the way, I learnt a lot of Chinese words. Last, thenk you for writing such a good story.