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  •   当时我是对花花这篇文的人设很感兴趣才慢慢开始看的然后因为花花你不紧不慢不疾不徐慢慢吞吞慢条斯理(此处省略924字)的敲字速度才忍不住浮出来的\\爱德华的永远17岁的外表身体犹如雕塑皮肤苍白古铜色的头发眼圈泛紫对待爱情的小心翼翼他的一切一切都令我着迷不已相对之下我又有些不太喜欢贝拉对待爱情的犹豫不决\\爱Vian的双性格天然呆治愈萌和腹黑敢爱敢恨同情心怜悯心执著\\觉得暮光原著里爱德华和贝拉是因为血契而相爱很坑很奇怪很假但很喜欢爱德华和Vian这种竹马系的养成文\\花花把Vian青春期的情感困惑与扑朔迷离的感情纠葛刻画得真切细腻丝丝入扣的描写与洗练优雅精致微妙的笔触让我更加沉醉沁人心脾的温存与缠绵之中让我切身见证了Vian和Eward青春的璀璨初恋的美好><
    PS标点符号实在无能啊
    PS2花花就算不喜欢也要装作很喜欢
    PS3这是人家第一次写长评花花看着办吧
    小海藻
    2011711
    i lie awake at night
    See things in black and white
    I\'ve only got you inside my mind
    You know you have made me blind
    I lie awake and pray
    that you will look my way
    I have all this longing in my heart
    I knew it right from the start
    Oh my pretty pretty boy I love you
    Like I never ever loved no one before you
    Pretty pretty boy of mine
    Just tell me you love me too
    Oh my pretty pretty boy I need you
    Oh my pretty pretty boy I do
    Let me inside make me stay right beside you
    I used to write your name
    And put it in a frame
    And sometime I think I hear you call
    Right from my bedroom wall
    You stay a little while
    And tough me with your smile
    And what can I say to make you mine
    To tough out for you in time
    Oh my pretty pretty boy I love you
    Like I never ever loved no one before you
    Pretty pretty boy of mine
    Just tell me you love me too
    Oh my pretty pretty boy I need you
    Oh my pretty pretty boy I do
    Let me inside make me stay right beside you
    Oh pretty boy pretty boy pretty boy
    Say you love me too
    Oh my pretty pretty boy I love you
    Like I never ever loved no one before you
    Pretty pretty boy of mine
    Just tell me you love me too
    Oh my pretty pretty boy I need you
    Oh my pretty pretty boy I do
    Let me inside make me stay right beside you
    >pretty boy<

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